Mise-en-scene within Children's opening sequence

I will be discussing the mise-en-scene within our children's opening sequence by discussing the following areas;
Narrative
Costumes
Props
Location

Costumes; For one character ( school girl) they need to be wearing smart/school clothes. For one character, they will be wearing casual clothes as they will be running. The last character in our sequence will be wearing official clothes. Like a large overcoat and hat.
Narrative; The narrative for our opening sequence is as follows:
First frame, we see a whiteboard at a long shot view.
Second frame, we see a high angle shot of a girl in school clothes reading/writing at a desk.
Third frame, a man is running away from suspicion and a man in a long overcoat with looking official.
Fourth frame, a point of view shot over of the 'Official'.
Fifth frame, medium shot of the schoolgirl who is still engrossed in her studies. Though, she is looking very shifty.
Sixth frame, a point of view shot again of the 'Official' of the the guy in casual clothes running.
Seventh frame, side shot of the schoolgirl.
Eighth frame, another side shot of the school girl but closer, she is saying things under her breath in anxiety.
Nineth Frame, you see what the school girl has been looking at, writing.

Props;
Pen
Paper
Desk and chair
The costumes
Mobile phone

Location;
The location will be taking in two different places. One will be taken at a field near the edge of trees. The other will be in a classroom.